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  1. Kassie

    Oh my… I could not take my eyes off of this. Seriously you did great! I spilt my glass of water and did not bother to clean it up until I was done reading it. Lol now…. I got a mess to clean my son thought it was fun to play in this water on my floor. I love your short story.

  2. Wow! Being an avid reader of your fiction Debbie, this story doesn’t surprise me but it still gives me tingles and keeps me interested. I feel sorry for Danny, lol Love it! And thanks so much for hosting #anythinggoes

    • Oh and I forgot to say that for a while there I was thinking about her watching Danny die that what if, despite her love for him, just like with her husband, Danny ended up doing the same thing and she would again, watch him die? Makes me wonder if that’s what she thinks about while she is thinking about watching Danny die. That he could do the same thing her husband did. Makes you think:)

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