Welcome to day eleven of the A to Z Challenge! My theme is 100 word (give or take a word or two) flash fiction on the darker side of human nature. I hope you enjoy.
Killer
I am a killer. I kill hundreds, even thousands of people. Not physically, I could never get away with that. I am cleverer than that, subtler. I kill dreams, hopes, wants. I kill your dreams and extinguish your spark. When I am finished, you are an empty shell. Someone undeserving of love, undeserving of happiness. I am not ruthless though. I only kill if you allow me in. I never enter uninvited, but once you let me in, you are mine. There is no escape. Who am I? A vampire? A parasite? No. I am your own self doubt.
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Bobbi Capwell
Man that hit home!!
Debbie, My Random Musings
Yes, we’ve all been there haven’t we!
Sneha
Hello 🙂 That was a lovely read. How did i miss this in the last 10 days. I love the theme.well am doing on emotions so can totally related to this as well.I am glad to get connected to you cause of the challenge.
Would definitely come back for more. Happy blogging and all the best with the remaining posts.
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Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you, it’s a really fun theme to write! Hope to see you again soon 🙂
Cynthia
Ah….that self doubt. We must figure a way to extinguish that dark spark.
Debbie, My Random Musings
Yes, it really is a killer!
Julian Wang
I am a killer. I kill hundreds, even thousands of thoughts everyday. Am I criminal of my own soul or criminal of people who are connected to me. They look at me with hopes and dreams. All came to an end with a smile. I know one life is not enough to pay debt. Debt of love and respect but I am a killer. It does not matter any more to me. One thing know for sure, I am not alone, who is killing their thoughts every min. It may be you or you or may be you !!!
I know it is not good as your one but I tired !! 🙂 Thanks, your words are inspirational
Debbie, My Random Musings
I love it! Thank you 🙂
Josie Two Shoes
Wow, powerful story that hits you right square where it needs to! We ARE our own worst enemies, we encourage everyone else and put ourselves down. We believe in others and we doubt ourselves. We give up too easily. Well done! And thanks for visiting my blog! 🙂
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you. That’s so true, I’m forever telling other people “Go for it” etc and when it comes to myself I over think to the point where I don’t do it!
The Silver Fox
Until that last line, I thought you were channeling one of my ex-girlfriends. 🙂
(Just kidding. Great piece!)
Debbie, My Random Musings
Haha love this comment 🙂 Thank you!
Ginni Deville
Clever end twist, this brought a smile and its so true
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Yvonne
I was trying to work out what you were referring too, I didn’t expect it to be self-doubt. Very true though and I am sure the majority can relate. x
Debbie, My Random Musings
It’s definitely a place I’ve been and I’m sure a lot of us bloggers have felt like this at some point! x
Kimberley Cooper
Like it, nicely done. I wonder why we sabotage ourselves in this way, with our fears and doubts. One thing I would disagree with though. I think you CAN overcome your self doubt but it takes a lot of courage, a lot of time, and as much encouragement from others as you are prepared to listen to. Sending positive thoughts to everyone who has ever had this Killer inside them.
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you 🙂 Yes, that’s a fair point, sometimes you just have to believe the people around you!
Patricia Lynne
That sounds like a IWSG post!
~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Debbie, My Random Musings
I’m hoping that’s a good thing lol 🙂
Liz A.
Oh yes. So true.
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you 🙂
Natalia Pessoa
Who doesn’t have self doubt right? Yes, it’s a silent killer indeed. The worst kind.
Debbie, My Random Musings
I think it’s definitely something bloggers can relate to!
Geets
What a subtle way to give all of us the correct message. It kills us only if we allow it to! And it kills so bad!
Wonderful piece of writing it is!
Cheers
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you 🙂 And it’s true, it really can ruin our dreams, but only if we allow it to