Welcome to day seventeen of the A to Z Challenge! My theme is 100 word (give or take a word or two) flash fiction on the darker side of human nature. I hope you enjoy.
Quiet
It’s so quiet. Peaceful. Except quiet doesn’t bring me peace. Quiet allows my mind to wander, allows me to think. The quiet is like a living, breathing thing. A malevolent thing that takes me deeper into the bowels of my mind, a place I don’t want to go. I have no choice. I am compelled to go there. I want to shout, fight the dark places, throw them away or shed light on them. But in the quiet, all I can do is think, ponder, and fall deeper into the abyss. The quiet stalks me, waits for me, and I succumb.
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Patricia Lynne
I can relate to that one. During stressful times the quiet at bedtime can be quite haunting because I have time to think and dwell.
~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Debbie, My Random Musings
Yes, I’m not a fan of quiet, it’s so easy to start overthinking!
Liz A.
Someone said he didn’t trust quiet. Knew it was plotting.
Quiet is my word for tomorrow, too. Well, sort of.
Debbie, My Random Musings
I must admit, I prefer noise to quiet! Oh am intrigued now lol 🙂
Natalia
I love quiet! Haha although over time it can be very corrupting… XO
Debbie, My Random Musings
Yes, too much of it drives me crazy, I like a bit of background noise
Pat Garcia
One of the things that I treasure most is the quiet. I have to admit that it is at those times when I relate to myself the most.
Shalom,
Patricia
Debbie, My Random Musings
I’m not a huge fan of quiet (although not for the reasons in the story lol). I like background music for pretty much everything
Debbie
Julie @ Reading Life
Visiting from A to Z. I love this, it’s very true for me sometimes although not quite on the same scale. I need background noise if I’m worried or else I’ll just worry needlessly. Great post!
Debbie, My Random Musings
I’m exactly the same, I concentrate better with a bit of back ground noise too! Thank you so much 🙂
Cynthia
Maybe that’s why I often like to work with some light music.
Debbie, My Random Musings
I like a bit of background music too 🙂
Lianne Kruger
I love your picture for each day with the letter, the title and the picture. I really like today’s picture.
All very well done.
I also like your writing on the subject. About 100 words is a really good exercise to do for writers.
Great job.
Debbie, My Random Musings
Thank you so much 🙂 I’ve really enjoyed writing the 100 word stories. This is my first attempt at really short fiction.
Yvonne
Not a huge fan of quiet, which is lucky living with twins ha ha! X
Debbie, My Random Musings
Lol, yeah I don’t think you’ll get much quiet time! x